BACKWWARDS AND THEN SOME

I still had page 10, panel five on the table, so I decided to ink that next. I think there were three points when I got a little too careless with the pen and wound up splooging all over the page. There's the fucked word balloon and then there's the dialog where I tried to write 'sugges twe'.



As a single image, I wish I had a little more going on in the midground, some more guns or something. I left it empty because the same basic image is used a few times with stuff that does happen in the midground. Do I sacrifice the individual composition for comics? Or will the comic only be better with full solids? I kinda want to stick a big WWII machine gun in there...